Simpler Times

Remember when?
The whir of a mosquito
Didn’t maybe mean death?
The gleam in a girl’s eye
Wasn’t for some other guy?
The song in your heart
Said something other than just blah?

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For Trifextra:  33 words including at least one example of onomatopoeia.

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19 Responses to Simpler Times

  1. barbara says:

    oh, those simpler times. This is lovely

  2. Lovely but sad. Thanks for linking up.

  3. Draug419 says:

    This is sad ):

  4. atrm61 says:

    How well said & so true!

  5. Sad yes, but maybe hopeful for things to change?

  6. jannatwrites says:

    Yes, times have changed. I like what you did with this one!

  7. Ahhaha. Oh, do I ever remember!

  8. Anna says:

    I have too much blah in my heart right now Much, much too much blah.

    • Me also. It takes me 2 weeks to feel like replying to comments, if I feel like doing anything at all. I feel like saying “it’s blah here too”, but that it would be like saying to my next door neighbor, “Well it’s been cold and gray and rainy here” and him saying “That’s funny–it’s been cold and gray and rainy here also.” I guess we both know it’s blah at times, though, since the grass is always greener on the other side, I’m sure your blah-ness will leave faster than mine. 😉

  9. No. Don’t remember those…! But like the poem.

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