Weekend Trifextra thing:
This weekend’s challenge is to give us a story or snippet of a story which includes, in exactly 33 words, a justified exclamation point. Make us believe that your exclamation point simply needs to be in your story. The writer with the most believable exclamation wins.
The disgraced evangelist begged for forgiveness for sinning with a prostitute. His son-in-law sat, watching his meal ticket groveling, punctuating the old man’s every ardent plea, mouthing his own urgent I Love You!